Comments for down in me http://downinme.com Tue, 09 Mar 2010 23:17:54 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 Comment on Back to my place by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4934 Ani Smith Tue, 09 Mar 2010 23:17:54 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4934 Mr Manning! Honestly. Mr Manning! Honestly.

]]> Comment on Back to my place by ryan manning http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4933 ryan manning Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:35:48 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4933 poke that ass poke that ass

]]> Comment on Back to my place by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4928 Ani Smith Mon, 01 Mar 2010 21:05:30 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4928 RC Miller: Why thank you, Mr Miller. AUW: Alas, those days have long since passed. Valerie: Do it again. Please? RC Miller: Why thank you, Mr Miller.

AUW: Alas, those days have long since passed.

Valerie: Do it again. Please?

]]> Comment on Back to my place by valerie http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4927 valerie Mon, 01 Mar 2010 13:24:21 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4927 i poke you for this yay. i poke you for this yay.

]]> Comment on Back to my place by An Unreliable Witness http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4926 An Unreliable Witness Sun, 28 Feb 2010 19:04:00 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4926 This definitely begs to be <hint> read aloud </hint>, you know. This definitely begs to be <hint> read aloud </hint>, you know.

]]> Comment on Back to my place by RC MIller http://downinme.com/2010/02/28/back-to-my-place/comment-page-1/#comment-4925 RC MIller Sun, 28 Feb 2010 16:06:32 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2109#comment-4925 love this. love this.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by Spanish Goth http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4923 Spanish Goth Sat, 27 Feb 2010 05:47:58 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4923 Don't like to be presumptive but, if you change every line except the last to the past tense - this empowers you. Don’t like to be presumptive but, if you change every line except the last to the past tense - this empowers you.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4917 Ani Smith Thu, 25 Feb 2010 20:07:29 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4917 Jem: Aw, cheers. Runny Sunday feels good in the mouth. Isabelle: Not catching, just desirable my dear. Jem: Aw, cheers. Runny Sunday feels good in the mouth.

Isabelle: Not catching, just desirable my dear.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by isabelle http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4916 isabelle Thu, 25 Feb 2010 15:14:22 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4916 Weird. Ani, someone else said that to me a few days ago. I hope I'm not catching. Weird. Ani, someone else said that to me a few days ago. I hope I’m not catching.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by jem http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4915 jem Thu, 25 Feb 2010 11:50:39 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4915 More signs of that control here Ani. And it suits you. I like the way this subtly builds to reinforce a message. I like the bowl image and also the idea of a 'runny Sunday'. More signs of that control here Ani. And it suits you. I like the way this subtly builds to reinforce a message. I like the bowl image and also the idea of a ‘runny Sunday’.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4913 Ani Smith Wed, 24 Feb 2010 23:58:12 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4913 Isabelle: Fucking hell, I thought about you and here you are. No one would believe me but it's true. For about two days I thought Isabelle. Jim: It's exactly what it sounds like, Jim. Isabelle: Fucking hell, I thought about you and here you are. No one would believe me but it’s true. For about two days I thought Isabelle.

Jim: It’s exactly what it sounds like, Jim.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4912 Jim Murdoch Wed, 24 Feb 2010 14:38:37 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4912 I have no idea what a runny Sunday is but it sounds truly awful. I have no idea what a runny Sunday is but it sounds truly awful.

]]> Comment on A shine that shone by isabelle http://downinme.com/2010/02/23/a-shine-that-shone/comment-page-1/#comment-4911 isabelle Wed, 24 Feb 2010 09:56:08 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2106#comment-4911 I love this. Especially the bowl bit. I love this.
Especially the bowl bit.

]]> Comment on To know what it’s like you in me by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/17/to-know-what-its-like-you-in-me/comment-page-1/#comment-4909 Ani Smith Thu, 18 Feb 2010 22:54:27 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2102#comment-4909 Thanks, Jim. I think I should've said 'what happens IF the questions are answered' because I haven't made it there yet. I like infatuation too much, I am constantly infatuated and not just with people. Thanks, Jim. I think I should’ve said ‘what happens IF the questions are answered’ because I haven’t made it there yet. I like infatuation too much, I am constantly infatuated and not just with people.

]]> Comment on To know what it’s like you in me by Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2010/02/17/to-know-what-its-like-you-in-me/comment-page-1/#comment-4908 Jim Murdoch Thu, 18 Feb 2010 13:53:33 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2102#comment-4908 The last two sentences are excellent. I just read them out to my wife and she agrees. I think infatuation is extended curiosity because the novelty wears off. Love is all that's left after all the questions are answered which is why you see old biddies sitting side by side on park benches not talking and often not even touching. I take a similar view to love as Huxley did to happiness; it's nowhere near as spectacular as people (the media especially) would have us believe. The last two sentences are excellent. I just read them out to my wife and she agrees. I think infatuation is extended curiosity because the novelty wears off. Love is all that’s left after all the questions are answered which is why you see old biddies sitting side by side on park benches not talking and often not even touching. I take a similar view to love as Huxley did to happiness; it’s nowhere near as spectacular as people (the media especially) would have us believe.

]]> Comment on When you die the asphalt will let out a cry by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-4907 Ani Smith Tue, 16 Feb 2010 20:15:32 +0000 http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/#comment-4907 Emma, don't be such a sweetheart. Seriously though, you're onto something. Sometimes I feel incapable of telling an actual story being so much more involved with the melody. It's a general failing and I go in cycles as to whether I care. Emma, don’t be such a sweetheart. Seriously though, you’re onto something. Sometimes I feel incapable of telling an actual story being so much more involved with the melody. It’s a general failing and I go in cycles as to whether I care.

]]> Comment on When you die the asphalt will let out a cry by Emma http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-4906 Emma Tue, 16 Feb 2010 11:20:30 +0000 http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/#comment-4906 Your writing lately has been controlled, but it's also been like the almost-familiar tone of a song, changing with tempo and popping at appropriate crescendos. When I think of writing that is art, I think of this. This is like words wrapped up together, cellophane wrapped sorta, and left in tidy boxes. It's less storytelling and more like a canvas, and I really can't stop looking at it. How do you do this, Ani? How do you make me feel in paragraphs. Your writing lately has been controlled, but it’s also been like the almost-familiar tone of a song, changing with tempo and popping at appropriate crescendos. When I think of writing that is art, I think of this. This is like words wrapped up together, cellophane wrapped sorta, and left in tidy boxes. It’s less storytelling and more like a canvas, and I really can’t stop looking at it.

How do you do this, Ani? How do you make me feel in paragraphs.

]]> Comment on When you die the asphalt will let out a cry by Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-4905 Ani Smith Mon, 15 Feb 2010 20:10:23 +0000 http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/#comment-4905 Jem: I like where your mind went with that line, v-day, which is not where my mind was at all. There IS something controlled about my writing lately, too, you're right. Interesting. Your sharing observations help me. Thank you. Jem: I like where your mind went with that line, v-day, which is not where my mind was at all. There IS something controlled about my writing lately, too, you’re right. Interesting. Your sharing observations help me. Thank you.

]]> Comment on When you die the asphalt will let out a cry by jem http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/comment-page-1/#comment-4904 jem Mon, 15 Feb 2010 11:14:50 +0000 http://downinme.com/2010/02/14/when-you-die-the-asphalt-will-let-out-a-cry/#comment-4904 A nice sense of control throughout this one. This is my favourite part - 'A handful of hurts like a monsoon of petals: say hello to them, say no to them: wrap you up in clear plastic and you say a prayer for lust.'. Great title too. And well timed amid all the plastic wrapped romance. A nice sense of control throughout this one. This is my favourite part - ‘A handful of hurts like a monsoon of petals: say hello to them, say no to them: wrap you up in clear plastic and you say a prayer for lust.’. Great title too. And well timed amid all the plastic wrapped romance.

]]> Comment on For people to go away you should fuck them by medicatedlady http://downinme.com/2010/01/31/for-people-to-go-away-you-should-fuck-them/comment-page-1/#comment-4900 medicatedlady Fri, 05 Feb 2010 15:30:30 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2092#comment-4900 Brilliant. I related to this piece. For God's sake, men need to be men in regard to women. Brilliant. I related to this piece. For God’s sake, men need to be men in regard to women.

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