http://downinme.com/2010/07/27/i-have-written-about-puppies-today/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Fri, 11 May 2012 00:46:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://downinme.com/2010/07/27/i-have-written-about-puppies-today/comment-page-1/#comment-5098 Ani Smith Sun, 01 Aug 2010 10:35:23 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2286#comment-5098 my dick is god my dick is god

]]> http://downinme.com/2010/07/27/i-have-written-about-puppies-today/comment-page-1/#comment-5097 ryan manning Fri, 30 Jul 2010 22:44:40 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2286#comment-5097 my dick is good my dick is good

]]> http://downinme.com/2010/07/27/i-have-written-about-puppies-today/comment-page-1/#comment-5094 Ani Smith Wed, 28 Jul 2010 17:44:33 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2286#comment-5094 hahaha, thanks jim. but to paraphrase the iconic jules whitfield: i am not asking a question! i am making a statement! hahaha, thanks jim. but to paraphrase the iconic jules whitfield: i am not asking a question! i am making a statement!

]]> http://downinme.com/2010/07/27/i-have-written-about-puppies-today/comment-page-1/#comment-5093 Jim Murdoch Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:00:28 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=2286#comment-5093 I enjoyed 'It Is Okay For Me To Play With Your Penis' very much. One of the strongest pieces from you in a while. Quite tragic actually. I actually misread it the first time but you might want to think about changing the opening statement to a question: "Is it all right if I play with your penis etc?" Either way, very good. I enjoyed ‘It Is Okay For Me To Play With Your Penis’ very much. One of the strongest pieces from you in a while. Quite tragic actually. I actually misread it the first time but you might want to think about changing the opening statement to a question: “Is it all right if I play with your penis etc?” Either way, very good.

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