Comments on: pale

By: James Bent

James Bent — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 12:39:15 +0000

what’s “shit [poetry]” about that? I like it.

Michael — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 21:23:13 +0000

Gorgeous.

Kelly — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 21:20:49 +0000

Yes. This is my 30’s. I want to rub up against everyone I meet. Make so much friction I detonate.

ben prisk — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:08:15 +0000

….and pardon me.

ben prisk — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:07:43 +0000

I want my mother to forget

ellie — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 22:19:49 +0000

And with a little mustard please. ;-)

Ani Smith — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 17:03:48 +0000

Ellie, that’s how we will eat him. ;)

ellie — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 12:36:07 +0000

brilliant! … until his mother forgets she had a son …

Ani Smith — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 20:17:09 +0000

Thanks, Ben. Thanks, Sizoe.

Sizoe — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 04:11:23 +0000

Fucking amazing. Gets better every time I read it.

ben prisk — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:30:27 +0000

Man, I love that last sentence! Very good!