Comments on: In a parking lot pissing behind a toyota rav4 http://downinme.com/2009/10/27/in-a-parking-lot-pissing-behind-a-toyota-rav-4/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Fri, 11 May 2012 00:46:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/10/27/in-a-parking-lot-pissing-behind-a-toyota-rav-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4710 Ani Smith Thu, 29 Oct 2009 00:16:44 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1934#comment-4710 Thank you, handsome boys. I think I just ovulated. Thank you, handsome boys. I think I just ovulated.

]]> By: RC MIller http://downinme.com/2009/10/27/in-a-parking-lot-pissing-behind-a-toyota-rav-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4709 RC MIller Wed, 28 Oct 2009 20:45:11 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1934#comment-4709 The choppy and schizoid nature of your phrasing here appeals to me greatly. Wonderfully troubling. The choppy and schizoid nature of your phrasing here appeals to me greatly. Wonderfully troubling.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/10/27/in-a-parking-lot-pissing-behind-a-toyota-rav-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4708 Jim Murdoch Wed, 28 Oct 2009 13:29:58 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1934#comment-4708 Got to agree with Rose, those last two sentences work well. Got to agree with Rose, those last two sentences work well.

]]> By: Rose Of Montague http://downinme.com/2009/10/27/in-a-parking-lot-pissing-behind-a-toyota-rav-4/comment-page-1/#comment-4707 Rose Of Montague Wed, 28 Oct 2009 06:06:40 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1934#comment-4707 "Stop carrying on like a birthday cake. Stop hoping." The turn of phrase makes me happy. The meaning makes me sad. Love it. “Stop carrying on like a birthday cake. Stop hoping.”

The turn of phrase makes me happy. The meaning makes me sad. Love it.

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