http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Fri, 11 May 2012 00:46:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4675 isabelle Mon, 12 Oct 2009 22:49:48 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4675 I like this a lot, in a dark Grimm's way. But you know, there's something about bleeding that I love, in a my body is working kind of way that's elemental and corporeal and bawdy. I like this a lot, in a dark Grimm’s way. But you know, there’s something about bleeding that I love, in a my body is working kind of way that’s elemental and corporeal and bawdy.

]]> http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4674 Ani Smith Mon, 12 Oct 2009 17:24:30 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4674 Cheers, Loopy! Cheers, Loopy!

]]> http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4672 Loopholes Sat, 10 Oct 2009 17:06:19 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4672 i love it! its intimate, honest and beautiful i love it! its intimate, honest and beautiful

]]> http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4671 Ani Smith Thu, 08 Oct 2009 22:46:36 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4671 There. Feels better. There. Feels better.

]]> http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4670 Ani Smith Thu, 08 Oct 2009 22:45:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4670 Yeah, except for that comma in number 2. It's pissing me off now. (Cheers, Jim.) Yeah, except for that comma in number 2. It’s pissing me off now. (Cheers, Jim.)

]]> http://downinme.com/2009/10/07/some-kids-are-frightened-by-their-mothers/comment-page-1/#comment-4669 Jim Murdoch Thu, 08 Oct 2009 07:40:45 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1908#comment-4669 Some very effective imagery in this one especially 1. and 2. Some very effective imagery in this one especially 1. and 2.

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