Comments on: Forswear my agitation http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Wed, 04 Jan 2012 11:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4655 Ani Smith Mon, 05 Oct 2009 18:48:46 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4655 I love chenchen! and you, krammer abrahams, you delightful stranger. I love chenchen! and you, krammer abrahams, you delightful stranger.

]]> By: krammer http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4654 krammer Mon, 05 Oct 2009 18:33:34 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4654 i love love. it's the best. jimmy chen told me that i believe him i think i'm doing love right now not sure i love love.
it’s the best.
jimmy chen told me that
i believe him
i think i’m doing love right now
not sure

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4648 Ani Smith Sun, 04 Oct 2009 18:47:07 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4648 Jim, I didn't mean to sound snippy. God I should thank you every day for sticking through this nonsense! You are one of the few (my theory is that you're all masochists, obviously). Just try not to worry so much about 'getting it' and just enjoy whatever comes to mind maybe? I don't know. Jim, I didn’t mean to sound snippy. God I should thank you every day for sticking through this nonsense! You are one of the few (my theory is that you’re all masochists, obviously). Just try not to worry so much about ‘getting it’ and just enjoy whatever comes to mind maybe? I don’t know.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4643 Jim Murdoch Sun, 04 Oct 2009 16:12:31 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4643 I never said it wasn't musical. I come to your site and I persist even when frustrated because I know you don't make arbitrary choices in you word usage. Call it therapy. I want to get it but I've been shackled to 'meaning' for a bit too long methinks. I never said it wasn’t musical. I come to your site and I persist even when frustrated because I know you don’t make arbitrary choices in you word usage. Call it therapy. I want to get it but I’ve been shackled to ‘meaning’ for a bit too long methinks.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4641 Ani Smith Sun, 04 Oct 2009 11:43:35 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4641 I love you Chris East! I love you Chris East!

]]> By: chris east http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4640 chris east Sun, 04 Oct 2009 09:55:03 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4640 sick love is for the sick sick
love is for the sick

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4637 Ani Smith Sat, 03 Oct 2009 02:05:23 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4637 Jim: Yes, if my purpose is to communicate meaning, of course 'distant' being but a question mark and an article away from 'distance' is offensively redundant. That's always been the fundamental difference between us: I'm willing to risk you (and many others, no doubt) finding it redundant, if someone else (at least one other) finds it lovely and musical the way I do. Isabelle: You usually seem to just instinctively know exactly what I mean. Can you give our friend Jim here some pointers please? ;) Jessica Maybury: Hello and welcome, Jessica. I too love things often, and I'm currently smitten with your train of thought. Jim: Yes, if my purpose is to communicate meaning, of course ‘distant’ being but a question mark and an article away from ‘distance’ is offensively redundant. That’s always been the fundamental difference between us: I’m willing to risk you (and many others, no doubt) finding it redundant, if someone else (at least one other) finds it lovely and musical the way I do.

Isabelle: You usually seem to just instinctively know exactly what I mean. Can you give our friend Jim here some pointers please? ;)

Jessica Maybury: Hello and welcome, Jessica. I too love things often, and I’m currently smitten with your train of thought.

]]> By: Jessica Maybury http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4636 Jessica Maybury Fri, 02 Oct 2009 16:41:42 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4636 I agree with isabelle. That's love all right. And by love I mean bondage and by bondage I mean love. I love things. I agree with isabelle. That’s love all right. And by love I mean bondage and by bondage I mean love. I love things.

]]> By: isabelle http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4635 isabelle Fri, 02 Oct 2009 08:12:42 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4635 ah, that's love alright in the last line. ah, that’s love alright in the last line.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/10/02/forswear-my-agitation/comment-page-1/#comment-4634 Jim Murdoch Fri, 02 Oct 2009 07:06:52 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1858#comment-4634 Isn't 'distant' redundant after you've just said 'distance'? And not a swear word anywhere in the piece - are you feeling well? Isn’t ‘distant’ redundant after you’ve just said ‘distance’?

And not a swear word anywhere in the piece - are you feeling well?

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