Comments on: Obviously http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Wed, 08 Sep 2010 23:00:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Loopholes http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/comment-page-1/#comment-4377 Loopholes Mon, 24 Aug 2009 22:27:38 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1740#comment-4377 (or Loopy if you prefer =) Blessed "i like you and i want to get to know more of you because i think you might be someone i might not be entirely embarrased to kiss in public." runs away screaming "ok then.. cool.. yea.. i'l see you around sometime" rustling leaves and a tinge of despair (or Loopy if you prefer =)

Blessed

“i like you and i want to get to know more of you because i think you might be someone i might not be entirely embarrased to kiss in public.”

runs away screaming

“ok then.. cool.. yea.. i’l see you around sometime”

rustling leaves and a tinge of despair

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/comment-page-1/#comment-4367 Ani Smith Sun, 23 Aug 2009 23:14:38 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1740#comment-4367 Mariana: Nah, not really. I actually don't talk to anyone at all. Life is much easier that way. Jim: You are becoming unhealthily obsessed with punchlines, I feel. Samuel Beckett: I love you, Sammy. Mariana: Nah, not really. I actually don’t talk to anyone at all. Life is much easier that way.

Jim: You are becoming unhealthily obsessed with punchlines, I feel.

Samuel Beckett: I love you, Sammy.

]]> By: Samuel Beckett http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/comment-page-1/#comment-4363 Samuel Beckett Sun, 23 Aug 2009 16:53:41 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1740#comment-4363 When I was alive, people were always saying to me that my scenes needed a punchline. But I said "No!" Or more accurately, I said "Uh?" And then "Hexagon!" That "Hexagon!" line was a classic, I thought. They didn't seem convinced. When I was alive, people were always saying to me that my scenes needed a punchline. But I said “No!” Or more accurately, I said “Uh?” And then “Hexagon!”

That “Hexagon!” line was a classic, I thought. They didn’t seem convinced.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/comment-page-1/#comment-4361 Jim Murdoch Sun, 23 Aug 2009 15:18:47 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1740#comment-4361 I think it needs a punchline. If I may... "Can I come too?" "No." "Why not?" "Becuase there needs to be someone here and I can't be both places at once." I'm getting carried away. I'll stop, I think it needs a punchline. If I may…

“Can I come too?”

“No.”

“Why not?”

“Becuase there needs to be someone here and I can’t be both places at once.”

I’m getting carried away. I’ll stop,

]]> By: mariana http://downinme.com/2009/08/23/obviously/comment-page-1/#comment-4360 mariana Sun, 23 Aug 2009 14:42:41 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1740#comment-4360 I suspected you only talked to the people from whom who can take some benefit for your own person. And here is the confirmation. I suspected you only talked to the people from whom who can take some benefit for your own person. And here is the confirmation.

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