Comments on: Sugar Water http://downinme.com/2009/07/21/sugar-water/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Thu, 09 Sep 2010 09:35:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/07/21/sugar-water/comment-page-1/#comment-4157 Ani Smith Tue, 21 Jul 2009 21:35:39 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1646#comment-4157 Jim: Doesn't even bear thinking about, Jim. Roberta: I know, right? Death is so inopportune. You reminded me of that Jim Morrison poem. Especially this part: <i>Do you know how pale and wanton thrillful comes death on a stranger hour unannounced, unplanned for like a scaring over-friendly guest you've brought to bed</i> Mariana: That's scarily perceptive of you. :) Jim: Doesn’t even bear thinking about, Jim.

Roberta: I know, right? Death is so inopportune. You reminded me of that Jim Morrison poem. Especially this part:

Do you know how pale and wanton thrillful
comes death on a stranger hour
unannounced, unplanned for
like a scaring over-friendly guest you’ve
brought to bed

Mariana: That’s scarily perceptive of you. :)

]]> By: mariana http://downinme.com/2009/07/21/sugar-water/comment-page-1/#comment-4156 mariana Tue, 21 Jul 2009 14:53:11 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1646#comment-4156 You where floating in the space You where floating in the space

]]> By: Roberta http://downinme.com/2009/07/21/sugar-water/comment-page-1/#comment-4155 Roberta Tue, 21 Jul 2009 14:24:14 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1646#comment-4155 I hate it when I die when I have only got up to pee. The inconvenience. I hate it when I die when I have only got up to pee. The inconvenience.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/07/21/sugar-water/comment-page-1/#comment-4154 Jim Murdoch Tue, 21 Jul 2009 04:59:15 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1646#comment-4154 Excellent little piece this. Unshirted hell or what? Excellent little piece this. Unshirted hell or what?

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