Sugar Water

21st July 2009

I got up to pee. In the dark, I slipped on slippers and shuffled in the direction of the bathroom. It felt darker than usual for bedtime. I stepped out of my bedroom into what I thought was my hallway but was a dark void. I died. Then I remembered I still had to pee. I died with a full bladder. Did you know that when you die you retain your last bodily state? A sort of psychic photograph. I died while needing to pee and slightly sleepy. Nobody was waiting for me in the bathroom. I kept reaching up to rub my eyes but I had no hands. I wished to pee and go back to bed but I could no longer find the hallway. Or the toilet. Or the bed. Or the door. Or the lightswitch. Or the other door. Or the floor. Or the wall. Or my flat. Or my face.

4 responses

  1. Jim Murdoch comments:

    Excellent little piece this. Unshirted hell or what?

  2. Roberta comments:

    I hate it when I die when I have only got up to pee. The inconvenience.

  3. mariana comments:

    You where floating in the space

  4. Ani Smith comments:

    Jim: Doesn’t even bear thinking about, Jim.

    Roberta: I know, right? Death is so inopportune. You reminded me of that Jim Morrison poem. Especially this part:

    Do you know how pale and wanton thrillful
    comes death on a stranger hour
    unannounced, unplanned for
    like a scaring over-friendly guest you’ve
    brought to bed

    Mariana: That’s scarily perceptive of you. :)

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