Remnants

16th July 2009

A pretty brunette with eyes like late afternoon golden suns on a planet that has two suns set in a peachy expanse of heaven.

I came back to tell you how much I loved it but you were gone.

I spit disease.

I’m tired of propping you up like we’re in a shitty eighties movie.

I’m tired of thin-lipped brunettes waxing pretty and making me agitated.

They don’t know what they’re talking about.

I would spank myself, but I don’t like the feeling of my skin against my palm.

But I like the feeling of my palm against my skin.

And I like the feeling of almost too drunk.

But I don’t like the feeling that comes next.

Just kind of waiting, waiting. And sleep is the cut off of waiting for brief hours until you wake to wait again.

7 responses

  1. xtx comments:

    okay. we really have to fuck now.

  2. jereme comments:

    i’m with xtx. let’s have some hot stinky horse fuck shit.

    fuck it. i’ll put a broom stick in my asshole or something.

    let’s get decadent.

  3. mariana comments:

    I do not think is decadent at all. It has lots of style the poem, the way it is written is so good. Makes me wanna kill myself but not in a decadent way

  4. Ani Smith comments:

    xTx: Oh, my dirty little temptress …

    Jereme: What is this? Give Ani blueballs day? And how did you know broomstick up your ass was my top Jereme masturbation fantasy.

    Mariana: Thanks, Mariana. Don’t kill yourself, though. Not yet, anyway.

  5. An Unreliable Witness comments:

    I really think people should stop writing such abject filth in Handy Smiff’s comments ‘box’.

    Firstly, because that’s my job.

    Secondly, because there might be impressionable children reading. (Unlikely, I know, but it could happen - my six-year-old nephew is a big fan of Dine In Me, and has learnt some of his best ‘sex words’ from reading its posts.)

  6. Ani Smith comments:

    Handy Smiff hearts An Unreliable Witless. [Oh and sorry about your nephew but it’s for the best really.]

  7. Columbo comments:

    As always, an inspiring use of words. Wish blogs had been around when I was a young’un…

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