Trudl machinates
21st May 2009Once Trudl shopped for a happy vibration, a pretty sky blue. Make it prose, make me prose, no more poetry. Once Trudl shopped for a vibrating joyful, a lovely plaything, curvy smart waves. Light up. Serene. Blue. Did I mention blue? Old Trudl she needed a quick and hefty release like a block of ice forming torched. Once Trudl found the right one quickly she went astray. Held the thing in a fist pump like she might hold her own cock. It shook her senseless mechanically. STEP ONE Trudl places the shaft parallel to her slit and presses down on the mound. STEP TWO Trudl locks her fist around and grinds. STEP THREE the orgasm is ripped from Trudl’s clit. Trudl misses the light touch but there’s simply no time. Once Trudl never owned a clock.
21st May 2009 at 11:34 pm
go trudi.
my rabbit is getting boring
any suggestions?
22nd May 2009 at 4:15 am
I am curious about the last sentence. Why not simply: ‘Trudl never owned a clock’? Why the ‘Once’?
22nd May 2009 at 10:38 pm
xtx: http://en.lelo.com/index.php?collectionName=femme&groupName=IRIS
Jim: You mean after all that you still don’t get me? Ah, Jim. Jimmy Jim Jim. :)
Okay, I’ll humour you:
The juxtaposition of once and never
The repetition
The story-ness of the word ‘once’
That she never owned a clock once, but she may do so now since ‘there’s simply no time’
That it sounds good to my ear
That not many people talk/write that way
Shall I keep embarrassing myself?
23rd May 2009 at 4:57 am
Not even people don’t have sex anymore (too much time an effort), now they do not evey use their hands anymore (still some effort), therefore the bunny gets elected (practically effort-free).
23rd May 2009 at 9:48 pm
I’ve read this about 4 times and every time through read ‘clock’ as cock. Is that stating the obvious?
Yah, about 4 times. Maybe 3. Seems like 4.
24th May 2009 at 12:25 pm
i read ‘clock’ as ‘cock’ too.
‘trudl’ made me think of ‘lidl.’
there’s that dan rhodes story with the character called grendl, or some other similar fairytale styled name. more names should end with an ‘l.’
the sky blue vibration was definitely pretty.
24th May 2009 at 6:43 pm
I didn’t read clock as cock. I read it as chicken. And we all know what ‘choking the chicken’ is a metaphor for, don’t we?
25th May 2009 at 3:29 pm
Mariana: Really? All people around me ever seem to do is have sex with each other.
Chris: Seems you weren’t the only one to read it that way.
Roberta: I love Dan Rhodes. Damn. Another one of those thinly-veiled influences? (The name came from something else directly though - but not from Lidl, ha.)
AUW: Apparently no one likes cock any more since the invention of fake plastic cock.
26th May 2009 at 8:42 pm
You are right Ani, it is probably just me, I guess I should start speaking to people and showering again.