Partial transcripts

20th April 2009

1.
The thing that you have to understand is that she’s a true professional. I mean, when you’re doing a photo shoot with Jenna, there’s no bullshit. What I most admire about her is that she has crazy control over her body. Every single inch of space is accounted for. Every limb, every curve, down to each finger, she controls it all. I think it’s all that yoga she does. But it’s not just that, it’s the way she regulates her breathing, in time with the flash. Her tongue is always at the optimum level of moisture. Seriously, I know it sounds ridiculous but she’s taught me so much. Oh you know what else? Okay, so sometimes you’ll be doing a photoshoot with someone, especially someone who might be a little inexperienced and you can smell the arousal wafting off them like fumes from a fishmonger’s. Like, you barely haven’t even grazed a nipple yet and their shit is salivating. Not with Jenna man, she can even control her arousal. So we get done with the preliminary shoot and it’s time to get nasty for the video and it’s like everything she had inside comes rushing out all at once and she becomes this gloriously sticky mess. That’s a pro yo, ha ha. That’s a true pro.

2.
I’m a kill that motherfucker, Jake. That motherfucker don’t know how much I dream of knifin’ him in the face. I’m a … OK, I’m not gonna kill ‘im. That’d give him too much reason to survive. Like inspire him to carry on. Like I’m adversity and dude’s gonna overcome ME. Hell naw. Jake exists on the motherfuckin’ cusp of the crest of my life and to kill a motherfucker is to kill a wave that washes over adversarily or some shit. Summarily, I ain’t about to. I’m a kiss that motherfucker. I’m a sit in righ’ close and I’m a whisper don’t you worry ‘bout a thing, son. This old stranger right ‘ere’s got nothing but love for his fellow man, you know what I’m sayin’? I’m a spit him some shit straight out of my favourite book the motherfuckin’ bible. That bastard’s been around and up the tree of motherfuckin’ life for too long but I’m not gonna be Judas or whoever killed the priest, oh no. That sure as hell ain’t gonna be me.

3 responses

  1. jem comments:

    I love this line ‘Her tongue is always at the optimum level of moisture.’ - I think there is a whole story or piece in that. Makes me wonder what different levels of moisture mean. What they could achieve.

  2. Jim Murdoch comments:

    Is this supposed to be a single work, a literary diptych? If so I think it’s an interesting combination and I’ve certainly seen it done visually before, two contrasting images. It might be an idea to suggest that the potential killer is also a pro in his own right so there is a connection between the two sections.

    And, if I’m being picky (me? picky?) I didn’t like “cusp of the crest of my life” - it feels too wordy for the character, not that he wouldn’t know the words, simply that he wouldn’t use them in an expression like this.

  3. Ani Smith comments:

    Jem: Yes, tongues have probably inspired many a story.

    Jim: Thanks, Jim. Just playing around with voices and seeing what they feel like. You’re right about the ‘cusp’ thing, I think. I was hoping it sounded more convoluted than it did.

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