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22 issue

19th March 2009

Ow stop that
Not like that
It’s hurting
So we stopped
One day
When we’re old
Honey remember when?
Honey will be
Dead but
His cocking dick
Knows what
It will tell all
The chicks
It’ll squabble
Over the feed
Peck their nipples
Bone sting
Bite sugar
Rock candy ‘til ill
I took two
The next day
I said
I’m going to
At least
Get high
Off my
Rapist boy
See you
Soon
She said
See you
In ICU
I took the
Biggest
Lollipop and
Left her
The gumball
22 issue
Number fives
And a
Pocket knife
Went to the
Nursery and
Said here
Take my
Baby girl
She’s sick
Sugar coma
Puking
All on me
Ow stop that
I bruise
Easy

Posted in Shit poetry on Thursday, March 19th, 2009 at 10:21 pm
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10 responses

  1. An Unreliable Witness comments:
    19th March 2009 at 10:27 pm

    What? Like a plum?

  2. xtx comments:
    20th March 2009 at 2:12 am

    i feel good that we are BFF’s

  3. Asia comments:
    20th March 2009 at 2:09 pm

    I never agree to anything unless I’m sure it’s going to hurt.

  4. Ani Smith comments:
    20th March 2009 at 7:17 pm

    AUW: Quiet, you! ;)

    Xtx: You’re my beshtesht beshtesht fwend! (I may have been hittin’ the bottle. Just sayin’.)

    Asia: A girl after my own heart. Do you also whine about it when you really mean ‘more please’?

  5. Jim Murdoch comments:
    20th March 2009 at 9:18 pm

    You know, it wouldn’t kill you to put a full stop at the end of a sentence. It’s not as if they charge extra and it would make my life so much easier. Or at least you could just put capital letters at the start of each sentence and not at the beginning of every line. I thought you were young and trendy.

  6. Ani Smith comments:
    22nd March 2009 at 12:40 am

    Jim, you know I thought about you after I made that decision. :)

  7. Monkey PotPie comments:
    22nd March 2009 at 6:50 am

    Honestly honesty. Terrific tragedy.

    More alliteration later.

  8. Paul comments:
    22nd March 2009 at 9:26 pm

    Oh, I suspect your closed your comments on the interview post so that people wouldn’t go, “Oh oh, I wanna be interviewed by you, please.” Didn’t work though. I like being interviewed it is a unique form of writing in itself, a very difficult challenge.

  9. Asia comments:
    23rd March 2009 at 1:36 pm

    Yes! how did you know?! I whine and pout to the point of ridiculousness, “why are you so mean to me?” I say between each blow job or sloppy kiss. He never knows where he’s going, but he’s always, always coming. ;)

  10. Ani Smith comments:
    23rd March 2009 at 7:52 pm

    Monkey Pot: I adore alliteration absolutely.

    Paul: Ha. No, I closed comments so you’d comment on the post there not here!

    Asia: Yes, ‘why are you so mean to me’ is one of my favourites, right after ‘you bastard’ and ‘oh my god no I mean yes I mean NO!’ ;)

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