Comments on: The Plot http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Wed, 04 Jan 2012 11:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: tiffini http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2657 tiffini Wed, 04 Mar 2009 02:16:03 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2657 dude,like,this piece was sooooooooo dope!! you freakin rock!! dude,like,this piece was sooooooooo dope!!

you freakin rock!!

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2541 Jack Smynde Mon, 16 Feb 2009 17:40:27 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2541 I was simply passing her a note that said she's liked. I'm just the messenger. And she doesn't care for me. I was simply passing her a note that said she’s liked. I’m just the messenger. And she doesn’t care for me.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2538 Ani Smith Mon, 16 Feb 2009 16:53:45 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2538 Jack: It's funny how what we know and what we want to know are rarely the same. AUW: I have no idea what that means. Xtx: I'd pay good money to see that. Jack: Kindly desist flirting with my future wife at once, Mr Smynde. Jim: Gosh Jim, you make me feel like you think that I don't realise what I'm doing when things I write are obscure, inaccessibly painful reads. Otto: Hello and welcome, Otto. I sincerely hope that's true. Jack: It’s funny how what we know and what we want to know are rarely the same.

AUW: I have no idea what that means.

Xtx: I’d pay good money to see that.

Jack: Kindly desist flirting with my future wife at once, Mr Smynde.

Jim: Gosh Jim, you make me feel like you think that I don’t realise what I’m doing when things I write are obscure, inaccessibly painful reads.

Otto: Hello and welcome, Otto. I sincerely hope that’s true.

]]> By: ~otto~ http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2537 ~otto~ Mon, 16 Feb 2009 02:18:28 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2537 I'm ready, fuck yeah I’m ready, fuck yeah

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2536 Jim Murdoch Sun, 15 Feb 2009 10:01:52 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2536 No charge for the extra 'with' BTW. No charge for the extra ‘with’ BTW.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2535 Jim Murdoch Sun, 15 Feb 2009 10:01:12 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2535 Very good. Open to interpretation with with enough there not to make filling in the blanks more of a pain than a pleasure. Very good. Open to interpretation with with enough there not to make filling in the blanks more of a pain than a pleasure.

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2531 Jack Smynde Fri, 13 Feb 2009 05:35:57 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2531 (Little does xtx know that she is the subject of the interaction) (Little does xtx know that she is the subject of the interaction)

]]> By: xtx http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2528 xtx Thu, 12 Feb 2009 15:05:39 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2528 i would like to see video of this interaction i would like to see video of this interaction

]]> By: An Unreliable Witness http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2527 An Unreliable Witness Thu, 12 Feb 2009 08:38:42 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2527 Have you been watching Songs Of Praise on a Sunday evening again? (I really love these little dialogues . . . ) Have you been watching Songs Of Praise on a Sunday evening again?

(I really love these little dialogues … )

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/02/12/the-plot/comment-page-1/#comment-2526 Jack Smynde Thu, 12 Feb 2009 04:28:44 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=1094#comment-2526 Oh, she knows alright. Oh, she knows alright.

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