Comments on: To cause to move to and fro http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Wed, 04 Jan 2012 11:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: tiffini http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2656 tiffini Wed, 04 Mar 2009 02:12:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2656 there's alot i could make of this... and so i did~ from "i'm a swawable whore" to the closing line I completely fell into it~ there’s alot i could make of this…
and so i did~

from “i’m a swawable whore”
to the closing line
I completely fell into it~

]]> By: jem http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2480 jem Thu, 05 Feb 2009 11:44:40 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2480 I like the ending especially - and I often find that's the hardest bit to get right. I like the ending especially - and I often find that’s the hardest bit to get right.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2467 Ani Smith Mon, 02 Feb 2009 11:11:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2467 Cheers, Debbie and Marc. I'm glad you enjoyed the little poem because she enjoyed you. Cheers, Debbie and Marc. I’m glad you enjoyed the little poem because she enjoyed you.

]]> By: Marc http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2466 Marc Mon, 02 Feb 2009 10:50:27 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2466 Rotting fish slaps many senses. Rotting fish slaps many senses.

]]> By: debbie http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2463 debbie Sun, 01 Feb 2009 11:19:42 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2463 i keep coming back to this. i keep coming back to this.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2462 Ani Smith Sat, 31 Jan 2009 10:00:41 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2462 What? I liked your first comment very much. As to your second one, well ... there's a time and place, as they say. I'm afraid I just don't know you like that yet, but don't feel bad, we just met. ;) What? I liked your first comment very much. As to your second one, well … there’s a time and place, as they say. I’m afraid I just don’t know you like that yet, but don’t feel bad, we just met. ;)

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2461 Jack Smynde Sat, 31 Jan 2009 06:38:30 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2461 Did I totally miss the boat on that one? Should I have just called you a really good whore and been done with it? I'd buy you. Sight unseen! I will BUY YOUR SEX!! Did I totally miss the boat on that one? Should I have just called you a really good whore and been done with it? I’d buy you. Sight unseen! I will BUY YOUR SEX!!

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/01/30/to-cause-to-move-to-and-fro/comment-page-1/#comment-2460 Jack Smynde Fri, 30 Jan 2009 15:04:37 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=997#comment-2460 I love when you speak of yourself as the whole of the human sexual condition like this. Not that the rest of us are as good at it as you are... I love when you speak of yourself as the whole of the human sexual condition like this. Not that the rest of us are as good at it as you are…

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