To cause to move to and fro

30th January 2009

I’m a swayable whore
side to side
I go vacillating
sidling up to sweet nothing
homeless cat
on rotting fish

Opportune and indiscreet
side to side
I go deviating
catching something
in the gutter
hoping something
catches me

8 responses

  1. Jack Smynde comments:

    I love when you speak of yourself as the whole of the human sexual condition like this. Not that the rest of us are as good at it as you are…

  2. Jack Smynde comments:

    Did I totally miss the boat on that one? Should I have just called you a really good whore and been done with it? I’d buy you. Sight unseen! I will BUY YOUR SEX!!

  3. Ani Smith comments:

    What? I liked your first comment very much. As to your second one, well … there’s a time and place, as they say. I’m afraid I just don’t know you like that yet, but don’t feel bad, we just met. ;)

  4. debbie comments:

    i keep coming back to this.

  5. Marc comments:

    Rotting fish slaps many senses.

  6. Ani Smith comments:

    Cheers, Debbie and Marc. I’m glad you enjoyed the little poem because she enjoyed you.

  7. jem comments:

    I like the ending especially - and I often find that’s the hardest bit to get right.

  8. tiffini comments:

    there’s alot i could make of this…
    and so i did~

    from “i’m a swawable whore”
    to the closing line
    I completely fell into it~

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