Comments on: WANTED #5 http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Wed, 04 Jan 2012 11:09:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: sevenperfumes http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2401 sevenperfumes Sun, 11 Jan 2009 17:12:14 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2401 Ani-- you're so brave for coming right out there with that. But are you sure it's an even exchange???? :) Ani— you’re so brave for coming right out there with that. But are you sure it’s an even exchange???? :)

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2391 Ani Smith Thu, 08 Jan 2009 22:24:03 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2391 AUW: You are a regular contributor?! You slut! Chris: Thank you, Mr Light. Can we lick toads or something instead, though? Bananas give me gas. Paul: The devil made me do it! Jack: I love bad poetry, most especially if it's written about me. Jim: Ha. I feel like my poor eyesight is a curse to make me suffer through the only thing in the world I like. Well, the second only thing. Clarissa: I certainly hope you don't have the same beard, too? AUW: You are a regular contributor?! You slut!

Chris: Thank you, Mr Light. Can we lick toads or something instead, though? Bananas give me gas.

Paul: The devil made me do it!

Jack: I love bad poetry, most especially if it’s written about me.

Jim: Ha. I feel like my poor eyesight is a curse to make me suffer through the only thing in the world I like. Well, the second only thing.

Clarissa: I certainly hope you don’t have the same beard, too?

]]> By: clarissa http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2390 clarissa Thu, 08 Jan 2009 21:35:10 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2390 Jim and I have the same glasses. Jim and I have the same glasses.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2389 Jim Murdoch Thu, 08 Jan 2009 20:20:55 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2389 I need to get my eyes tested. I read the first word as ethnically. Puts a whole different spin on the piece. I need to get my eyes tested. I read the first word as ethnically. Puts a whole different spin on the piece.

]]> By: Jack Smynde http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2388 Jack Smynde Thu, 08 Jan 2009 03:58:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2388 Isn't sex with you payment enough? Unless you're *really* hurting for bad poems... Isn’t sex with you payment enough? Unless you’re *really* hurting for bad poems…

]]> By: Paul http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2387 Paul Thu, 08 Jan 2009 01:26:09 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2387 Posted in - Temptation, haha, that's cute. Posted in - Temptation, haha, that’s cute.

]]> By: chris http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2386 chris Wed, 07 Jan 2009 23:21:07 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2386 Let's smoke a banana. Go crazy on the beach with Azerbaijanis... Let’s smoke a banana. Go crazy on the beach with Azerbaijanis…

]]> By: chris http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2385 chris Wed, 07 Jan 2009 22:56:32 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2385 Welcome back. What would you like? Welcome back.

What would you like?

]]> By: An Unreliable Witness http://downinme.com/2009/01/07/wanted-5/comment-page-1/#comment-2384 An Unreliable Witness Wed, 07 Jan 2009 21:10:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=803#comment-2384 Yes, do please join the merry band of illiterates at Shite Poetry Monthly. I am a regular contributor. I have learned to rhyme thistle with whistle. Nothing else, mind - just thistle with whistle. Yes, do please join the merry band of illiterates at Shite Poetry Monthly. I am a regular contributor. I have learned to rhyme thistle with whistle. Nothing else, mind - just thistle with whistle.

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