Comments on: Yours truly http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Thu, 09 Sep 2010 09:35:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2307 Ani Smith Sun, 23 Nov 2008 16:49:40 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2307 *immediately begins googling racoon tail prosthetics* *immediately begins googling racoon tail prosthetics*

]]> By: dinOS X http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2296 dinOS X Fri, 21 Nov 2008 21:52:48 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2296 This is just so lovely. I also think if women had tails, it would be a welcome addition. Maybe images like Catwoman from Batman have something to do with it... or maybe that is just Michelle Pfeiffer in an all in one leather catsuit that I'm thinking of specifically *the mind drifts for a moment*. A snout definitely evokes the imagery of pigs noses and other similar snouted animals. I think the word "muzzle" would've been better. Also it sounds like nuzzle and snuggle :) This is just so lovely.

I also think if women had tails, it would be a welcome addition. Maybe images like Catwoman from Batman have something to do with it… or maybe that is just Michelle Pfeiffer in an all in one leather catsuit that I’m thinking of specifically *the mind drifts for a moment*.

A snout definitely evokes the imagery of pigs noses and other similar snouted animals. I think the word “muzzle” would’ve been better. Also it sounds like nuzzle and snuggle :)

]]> By: Z http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2292 Z Fri, 21 Nov 2008 20:55:06 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2292 Raccoon tails, I think. Raccoon tails, I think.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2281 Ani Smith Thu, 20 Nov 2008 00:59:05 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2281 Jem: Cheers, Jem. Now if only I could develop characters and a story arc, I'd be in business. Jim: Yes, it is like that, isn't it? Except, I'm afraid even if you did have the other side, you still couldn't make heads or tails of it. Drodbar: You do have a weakness for charm, it's true ... I shall try to turn mine on a little more often. Jem: Cheers, Jem. Now if only I could develop characters and a story arc, I’d be in business.

Jim: Yes, it is like that, isn’t it? Except, I’m afraid even if you did have the other side, you still couldn’t make heads or tails of it.

Drodbar: You do have a weakness for charm, it’s true … I shall try to turn mine on a little more often.

]]> By: drodbar http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2280 drodbar Wed, 19 Nov 2008 15:46:46 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2280 I agree with Jem. I think the second sentence is one of your most charming (you could predict I would like that one, couldn't you?). An androgynous, open-sexed utopia is never going to happen. People prefer football and celebrity gossip. I agree with Jem. I think the second sentence is one of your most charming (you could predict I would like that one, couldn’t you?).

An androgynous, open-sexed utopia is never going to happen. People prefer football and celebrity gossip.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2266 Jim Murdoch Tue, 18 Nov 2008 18:09:13 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2266 Really not sure what to make about this one. It's very much like hearing one side of a rather odd telephone conversation which will only make sense when you have the whole thing. Really not sure what to make about this one. It’s very much like hearing one side of a rather odd telephone conversation which will only make sense when you have the whole thing.

]]> By: jem http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2264 jem Mon, 17 Nov 2008 13:20:37 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2264 I especially like the first paragraph. That ripple screen stuff is beautiful. You are very good at setting a scene. I especially like the first paragraph. That ripple screen stuff is beautiful. You are very good at setting a scene.

]]> By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2261 Ani Smith Mon, 17 Nov 2008 02:48:50 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2261 Z: Hm. Interesting theory. Are you thinking more longish puppy tails or fluffy cottontails? It's important. Paul: Thanks, Paul, that's much too kind. Ariel: Clearly we don't have similar tastes in men. Z: Hm. Interesting theory. Are you thinking more longish puppy tails or fluffy cottontails? It’s important.

Paul: Thanks, Paul, that’s much too kind.

Ariel: Clearly we don’t have similar tastes in men.

]]> By: Ariel http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2259 Ariel Mon, 17 Nov 2008 00:06:50 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2259 You say snout, I think pig. You say snout, I think pig.

]]> By: Paul http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2257 Paul Sun, 16 Nov 2008 20:35:43 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2257 That is beautifully whimsical and light. Gorgeous gentle tone. This is definitely one of my favourite pieces of yours that I've read. That is beautifully whimsical and light. Gorgeous gentle tone. This is definitely one of my favourite pieces of yours that I’ve read.

]]> By: Z http://downinme.com/2008/11/16/yours-truly/comment-page-1/#comment-2255 Z Sun, 16 Nov 2008 19:09:05 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=733#comment-2255 Ah, that was lovely. If women had tails, maybe I'd fancy them more. Ah, that was lovely.

If women had tails, maybe I’d fancy them more.

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