Comments on: A projector, sitting quiet and lonely in a corner of the room http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/ “bad writing is characterized by obfuscation, showboating, narcissism, lack of a moral core, and style over substance." Fri, 11 May 2012 00:46:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Ani Smith http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2112 Ani Smith Tue, 07 Oct 2008 13:48:07 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2112 Carah: Hello and welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed all parts. :) Paul: Oh, Paul, I bet you say that to all the girls. (wink,wink) Jem: Thanks, Jem. It was interesting figuring out the level of detail I wanted to go to, and why some details felt more important than others. Jim: I am just as fascinated by those fickle creatures as you, Mr Murdoch. Clarissa: You fickle creature, you. Roberta: Hello, Roberta. Gosh, I only wish I could approximate Ms July's tender, honest handling of difficult subjects. Isabelle: Did you smile and sigh deeply, too? AUW: Check the super secret back room of your local video store. You know, behind the beaded curtain. Carah: Hello and welcome. I’m glad you enjoyed all parts. :)

Paul: Oh, Paul, I bet you say that to all the girls. (wink,wink)

Jem: Thanks, Jem. It was interesting figuring out the level of detail I wanted to go to, and why some details felt more important than others.

Jim: I am just as fascinated by those fickle creatures as you, Mr Murdoch.

Clarissa: You fickle creature, you.

Roberta: Hello, Roberta. Gosh, I only wish I could approximate Ms July’s tender, honest handling of difficult subjects.

Isabelle: Did you smile and sigh deeply, too?

AUW: Check the super secret back room of your local video store. You know, behind the beaded curtain.

]]> By: An Unreliable Witness http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2111 An Unreliable Witness Tue, 07 Oct 2008 09:34:08 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2111 I've checked both Blockbuster and Lovefilm, and I can't find this movie anywhere. Can you help? I’ve checked both Blockbuster and Lovefilm, and I can’t find this movie anywhere. Can you help?

]]> By: isabelle http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2110 isabelle Tue, 07 Oct 2008 06:52:44 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2110 stretch out finger tip warm beautiful stretch out finger tip warm beautiful

]]> By: Roberta http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2109 Roberta Mon, 06 Oct 2008 23:03:47 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2109 Oh, this is gorgeous - especially the first couple of paragraphs. Like really tenderly voyeuristic and un-obviously intimate. It made me think a little of Miranda July's stories- maybe just because they're still fresh in my mind - but I think it's the perspective. Oh, this is gorgeous - especially the first couple of paragraphs. Like really tenderly voyeuristic and un-obviously intimate. It made me think a little of Miranda July’s stories- maybe just because they’re still fresh in my mind - but I think it’s the perspective.

]]> By: clarissa http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2108 clarissa Mon, 06 Oct 2008 20:39:51 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2108 God damn it. I'm always misplacing my sex tape. God damn it. I’m always misplacing my sex tape.

]]> By: Jim Murdoch http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2107 Jim Murdoch Mon, 06 Oct 2008 15:49:31 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2107 When I was young and still had a libido I was fascinated by all kinds of women. Those I saw in the real world with clothes I wanted to see without. Those I saw in the magazines (no such thing as video when I were a lad) I wanted to see clothed and take for coffee and get to know. As a writer I have a special place in my heart for voyeurs. When I was young and still had a libido I was fascinated by all kinds of women. Those I saw in the real world with clothes I wanted to see without. Those I saw in the magazines (no such thing as video when I were a lad) I wanted to see clothed and take for coffee and get to know. As a writer I have a special place in my heart for voyeurs.

]]> By: jem http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2106 jem Mon, 06 Oct 2008 10:06:46 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2106 This is really clever - great idea to pick up on the voyeurism after the hardcore stuff is over. I think watching people do the little everyday things is more pleasurable. Great eye to detail throughout. This is really clever - great idea to pick up on the voyeurism after the hardcore stuff is over. I think watching people do the little everyday things is more pleasurable. Great eye to detail throughout.

]]> By: Paul http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2096 Paul Sun, 05 Oct 2008 23:52:13 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2096 That is beautiful. A wonderful tender sensual piece of writing with a really subtle intelligence in the watching and being there nexus. Eloquent experience, I suspect. That is beautiful. A wonderful tender sensual piece of writing with a really subtle intelligence in the watching and being there nexus. Eloquent experience, I suspect.

]]> By: Carah A. Naseem http://downinme.com/2008/10/05/a-projector-sitting-quiet-and-lonely-in-a-corner-of-the-room/comment-page-1/#comment-2095 Carah A. Naseem Sun, 05 Oct 2008 22:39:07 +0000 http://downinme.com/?p=472#comment-2095 This all depends on what mood I'm in. It's one part voyeuristic, two parts romantic. or It's two parts voyeuristic, one part romantic. But it's all parts sexy... so I think you may have won this one. This all depends on what mood I’m in.
It’s one part voyeuristic, two parts romantic.
or
It’s two parts voyeuristic, one part romantic.
But it’s all parts sexy…
so I think you may have won this one.

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