Down In Me

Daddy dearest

Dear Daddy,

While I truly appreciate your support - financial and, um… financial - I regret to inform you that as of today I am no longer your keep. Yes, I have enjoyed the security of your virile embrace, but as you snap like a twig to the whims of dear old, Guantanamo womb - I mean, mummy - I feel your autumn song is my cue to exit stage left. My only regret is that I became a creature enthralled by the comforts you provided, instead of licking my chops and slinking out the back, immediately following the crème brûlée.

Bisous,
 Ani

6 responses

  1. clarissa comments:

    I think you wrote this for me? Except I no longer call him Dad or Daddy or Father. He is just a man who thinks he knows me and with whom I share a coffee every couple of years. Coffee I always buy these days. To prove the financial independence point.

  2. lissa comments:

    ha. this is great. i feel your sentiments completely. wish i could write a daddy letter with such style.

  3. Your Wandering Mind comments:

    Nice, I especially like the crème brûlée reference. I have a sweet tooth you know. Not to come across as ignortant, but I’ve never heard of the term “Bisous” before. Thanks for expanding my knowledge. Ah-voir.

  4. Jim Murdoch comments:

    I guess I was one of the lucky ones. I raised a daughter without a single avaricious bone in her body - “Please Daddy, please Daddy, don’t give me money”.

    I suppose I should write a book, make my fortune and bequeath it all to her in my will. Ah there’s the rub.

  5. An Unreliable Witness comments:

    Guantanamo womb’ is such a terrific phrase. It rolls off the tongue. I keep saying it. Even though, if I’m honest, it sounds a little like a sort of one-horse town you might have got in an old Western: “Sure, we’ve ridden here all the way from Guantanamo Womb to get to Hieronymus Gulch before sundown …”

  6. Ani comments:

    Clarissa: Sometimes coffee is the best we can do. And making light. We can make light of it, too.

    Lissa: Oh, you write a great many things with style. ;)

    Your Wandering Mind: ‘Bisous’ is French for ‘kisses’. Stick around and I’ll teach you the other three French words I know.

    Jim: Your daughter is a lucky girl, Jim. Sounds like you provide her with way more than just financial support.

    AUW: Heheh. My mother was less a mother and more a jailor, especially during my teenage years.

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