Down In Me

Literary Lust

Long, slender fingers tap tap tapping on an old, dusty typewriter
Abstract ideas coalesce into a moist and shameful longing
Each sentence is an invitation typeset in desire
Expertly punctuated with a heavy sigh

Held at the cusp of your narrative arc
Caressing every letter while each syllable caresses me in turn
Seductive metaphors that taunt and delight
And commas set for a brief pause, in all the right places

Paragraph by paragraph washes over me
In lasciviously lapping waves of page after page
A gushing stream of invisible thoughts connects us
Until finally, the whole of your composition erupts in orgasmic prose within me

14 responses

  1. ani comments:

    Yes, this post is about you.

  2. oe comments:

    Please do not feed the vanities.

  3. ani comments:

    Why? Do they bite?

  4. An Unreliable Witness comments:

    Wait a moment, oe. I was about to (quietly) shout, “This post is about me, isn’t it?” But I won’t. I’ll keep quiet. I’m far too modest (allegedly).

  5. isabelle comments:

    read late early night morning , still with me now.
    Beautifully, luciously brilliant

  6. isabelle comments:

    s

  7. ani comments:

    Unreliable - Oh but it IS about you (allegedly).

    Isabelle - Welcome and thanks.

  8. An Unreliable Witness comments:

    Modestly, I’ve begun to think that every blog post everywhere is about me (allegedly). But always (allegedly).

  9. Venus comments:

    This is wonderful.

  10. ani comments:

    Venus - Thanks. I had a feeling you might like it.

  11. Z comments:

    That was gorgeous. Why did I keep reading “composition” as “compassion”?

  12. ani comments:

    Z - Welcome and thanks. I read Smart Girls often so it’s nice to see one of you here.

  13. koningwoning comments:

    If you’re that serious about wallowing, I’d just put on either the downward spiral (if you’re seething) or the fragile (if you’re disparte) by NIN

  14. bushy comments:

    modern and excellent

    i liked

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